柜子5個一直在延，出不去，想催船公司趕緊安排出去。

Dear Sir,
Before Chinese Year, we he 5 containers, which values usdxxx, shipped in your company, but now they are still delayed. As you know, the goods are all garments for winter, we must deliver to customer timely to catch the season. Once the winter finishes, the goods will be worthless and our customer will not accept the goods. He said if the goods can not be dilivered to him before xx年xx月xx日, he would terminate our cooperations. At that time we will suffer a great loss in finance and even reputation.
We will conserve the right to ask for compensation from your esteemed company and kindly suggest you to expedite shipment to oid unnecessary loss for your esteemed company and us.


網(wǎng)友回答：謝謝哈，果然感覺不一樣，語氣不會顯得太生硬。

網(wǎng)友回答：Dear Sir,Before Chinese Year, we he 5 containers, which values usdxxx, shipped in your company, but now they are still delayed. As you know, the goods are all garments for winter, we must deliver to customer timely to catch the season. Once the winter finishes, the goods will be worthless and our customer will not accept the goods. He said if the goods can not be dilivered to him before xx年xx月xx日, he would terminate our cooperations. At that time we will suffer a great loss in finance and e

網(wǎng)友回答：沒有用很正式的句型。個人是認(rèn)為當(dāng)人在氣氛的時候應(yīng)該不會太正式，而是略帶口語性的言語，不知道是否可行