以下是我將要寫的促銷郵件，還望各位指點，看有什么地方需要修改的

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網(wǎng)友回答：分析的挺好的

網(wǎng)友回答：不錯，學習了

網(wǎng)友回答：不錯,我現(xiàn)在也發(fā)促銷信..

網(wǎng)友回答：純屬個人意思。。。新客戶與老客戶的郵件應該分來寫。。。新客戶重在發(fā)..老客戶重在回饋,并加深關系...新客戶給折扣重在打關系,讓他們愿意給我們一個機會試銷我們的產品..從而打市場..老客戶給折扣重在感情線,無論如何,長期合作伙伴感情是一定有的,折扣給的要他們知道這份感情的重要性..而當然關系的加深與新產品的介紹與發(fā)也是必要的..讓他們自行瀏覽網(wǎng)頁是不錯..但個人認為可不可以在郵件中加一些閃亮點..我是指你們認為的最可銷的產品,最搶眼的新產品..等..然后可以寫更多詳情請見本司網(wǎng)址..其實郵件只要突然重點就可..說你們想說的..(這個想說的前提說,說了能直接與目的掛購的)郵件只要突然幾點就可:一,六月為促銷月,如往常一樣特別折扣相見.二,推出最可銷產品,最搶眼新產品,詳情見網(wǎng)址.三,如有任何問題請及時與我們.歡迎下單。Ok..以上純屬個人意見。。僅供您參考。。。? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ? 嘴角