My name is Jim, an International trade salesman, live in Qingdao.I was born in 1987, a small village in China–a land which I he a complicated feelings towards it.All men there are created equal, but live unequally.Poor peoples' only hope is to study the knowledge that they never use in their lives;just for passing the examination they hated;go to college where they waste their best time in life.After graduation, staying in a city, live a “Happy Life” in other people’s eyes.This is the life of majority Chinese young men .However, I always think I’m a lucky dog ! Thank God!Because I didn't lost myself under this circumstance!I can still think and make decisions by my-own brain;distinguish what are the meaningful things to me;pursue love, truth, beauty and kindness in my life and work.He great enthusiasm for International Trade, language and IT.Good at Organic chemicals raw material, to become an expert in this field is my aim.Inner-energy and strong curiosity drive me work with heart and soul!A young man full of positive energy keeps on going!



網友回答：想表達一個遭遇悲催但一直誠實上進的jim

網友回答：感謝拍磚，我也感覺有可能沒有我們這樣的文化背景??理解有難度， 我是想引出 examination-oriented education;twisted social values我的悲催遭遇。 有什么高見？ 提提

網友回答：Good suggestion 我也感覺??但是 改句式時感覺功力不夠啊！可以幫幫忙，改一句也行

網友回答：我覺得用第一人稱太多了，很重復，按英語寫作課上的講法是“顯得過于自我’。可以在句式上調整下。還有后面那么多形容詞。。。

網友回答：未必老外明白你的幽默，還神奇的國土，那不是印度嗎？

網友回答：你想表達啥？

網友回答：不過這英語是挺溜的哈，值得肯定~

網友回答：怎么始時JIM 后面又是JACK，，費解啊

網友回答：謝謝鼓勵！ 是準備放在我的個人網站里的，方便國外客戶了解自己的，歡迎拍磚，里面用詞不到位或有更好的用詞，各位前輩幫我提提

網友回答：謝謝支持

網友回答：不錯~寫的很好~

網友回答：謝謝鼓勵！也歡迎拍磚，里面用詞不到位或有更好的用詞，各位前輩幫我提提！

網友回答：挺有新意的

網友回答：支持！